Run away!@__@ Oh right, lj-cut.

[keyk]

~_~;; I am definitely NOT happy with this.

It looked better back when it was just plain lineart...but once it was colored. EEEW. x_x;

His eyes are way too big...it doesn't fit him at all.
That zipper is lower than it should be. That was due to a mistake on the collar, but still...it looks terrible
The belt is up too high. It makes it look like his waist, but it isn't.
The background...stripes...haha, aren't I creative. >_>;
And..and...those arms...are definitely unproportional. ~_~; It doesn't match the 3/4 angle at all!

Someone please teach me how to draw crossed arms. *stabs picture*

Then why did I post this, you ask? Constructive criticism please! x__x; Comments are fine too, I guess. ^^;

This was supposed to be a quick little doodle....but it took hours instead. *stabs her dead art skills* I didn't even get to reply to the comments I got! T__T Forgive me~

Uhhh...this character does not belong to me. He belongs to Nomura Tetsuya. He's the Final Fantasy Versus XIII character if you're wondering.

I want to improve...DD: I wish I could use guidelines, but whenever I use them, it becomes too demented!...but without them, they still look really demented. Gah!

I'll cut my rant off here. :P

EDIT: Or not...

Taken from reveria

1. Comment and I'll tell you what fandom I associate with you.
3. I'll tell you what icon I see on my friends list and know it's you.
2. Post this in your own journal so I can see what you associate with me.

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