Run away!@__@ Oh right, lj-cut.

[keyk]

~_~;; I am definitely NOT happy with this.

It looked better back when it was just plain lineart...but once it was colored. EEEW. x_x;

His eyes are way too big...it doesn't fit him at all.
That zipper is lower than it should be. That was due to a mistake on the collar, but still...it looks terrible
The belt is up too high. It makes it look like his waist, but it isn't.
The background...stripes...haha, aren't I creative. >_>;
And..and...those arms...are definitely unproportional. ~_~; It doesn't match the 3/4 angle at all!

Someone please teach me how to draw crossed arms. *stabs picture*

Then why did I post this, you ask? Constructive criticism please! x__x; Comments are fine too, I guess. ^^;

This was supposed to be a quick little doodle....but it took hours instead. *stabs her dead art skills* I didn't even get to reply to the comments I got! T__T Forgive me~

Uhhh...this character does not belong to me. He belongs to Nomura Tetsuya. He's the Final Fantasy Versus XIII character if you're wondering.

I want to improve...DD: I wish I could use guidelines, but whenever I use them, it becomes too demented!...but without them, they still look really demented. Gah!

I'll cut my rant off here. :P

EDIT: Or not...

Taken from reveria

1. Comment and I'll tell you what fandom I associate with you.
3. I'll tell you what icon I see on my friends list and know it's you.
2. Post this in your own journal so I can see what you associate with me.

Comments

[akimori.livejournal.com]

hmm... not too good with critiquing but.. *scratches head* I think your arms are fine. They're pretty even. It's the torso that makes it look funny. Clothing design stuff I guess is easier for you to make judgements on since it is your work. XD To me it's not so bad. Me liking the hair colouring a lot though. XD

Anywhoo, I commented on Pompi's thing too for that meme, but what does that seco... wait a minute... your's says 3!!! OMG MIND GAMES!!! D

[keyk.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your input! ToT

I messed with the arms so much, I forgot about the torso. x_x; What you said does make sense, so I'm grateful for the crtique. :D Should it stick out more or something? :D;

Hehe, hair is fun to color. XD Thanks for the compliment too~ X3

To the meme!

1) Suikoden! XD

3)
>:D

[pompi.livejournal.com]

O_o; OMgoshWTfridgeBARBEQUE. xDDDD;;; *is stupid*
WAAAAAH. *glare* Dx You're better than me. The eyes may not match to you, but it looks really good.
The arms are okay. It's the torso that's wrong. It's angled, but the arms are not. O_o; You can go ask me more if ya want, but I'm commenting for the meme to so yah.

[keyk.livejournal.com]

Shut up, I'm not better than you! DDD: *whacks*

Tell me more~ ;_;

1) Mushishi!:D

2)
This is new...but it's so funny! XD

[keyk.livejournal.com]

Oh, right...I forgot. I'm so rude.

Thank you~ ;_;